Monday, April 4, 2016

Comments for Robin Williams: Hunter and Matt R.

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9 comments:

  1. There was really good team work. I liked the amount of info you did bring about the disease but I think you should add if the disease what made him commit suicide or was it depression. I also like the contrast between Adam Sandler. Great Job!

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  2. I thought it was really great how you mentioned how different Robin Williams humor was compared to Adam Sandler I had never thought about it that way so it really opened my eyes. Personally I would've liked more background details for example how old he was when he died. Overall there wasn't really anything that stood out to me as needing fixed, you guys did a really great job!

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  3. I really liked how you gave some fun facts. For example; you told us of a time when he was doing a performance and actually gave an audience member a hernia during that performance. I also liked how you guys were very confident and seemed to be having fun during the presentation.
    For the power point, it was very pretty. I feel it had a bunch of information on it. I think if you would have put a little more of that information on the outline to kind of balance out that information.
    I really liked the tribute video you guys did with it. But I also would have liked to know a little more about some of his other movies.

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  4. great team worked i like how your tone of vice was very clear and understanding the amount of information was good .great idea to compare adam sandler to robin Williams i learned that even when your has funny and great actor as he was no one knows what goes on behind the scenes on thing i think should have been added was talking about his disease a little more overall fantastic job

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  5. You did a great job of informing who Robin Williams was and how he came to fame and the roles he played in movies, however the infleunce was not as strongly stated as it could of been. You did a great job at pointing out how humorous he was and how versatile he was compared to Adam Sandler.

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  6. To me, the best part of the presentation was the comparing of Robin Williams and Adam Sandler. It really highlighted the fact that Robin Williams work had variety that people really enjoy. From the presentation, I learned that Robin Williams seemed to focus on bringing joy to others, instead of focusing on himself.

    I feel that the influences Robin brought to society could have been clarified a bit more.

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  7. I really thought the tribute to Robin helped show the different characters that he played and also the comparison to Adam Sandler because it showed different comedy styles and how Robin had a genuine humor and not something child like and perverted.
    Constructively I would have added a bit more information regarding his life and how he became famous through his role as Mork.

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  8. You had a great presentation. It was spoken very clear. I loved the comparison of Williams and Sandler's movies and the money that they both brought in. I grew up watching Mork and Mindy. Nanoo nanoo!
    I would have liked to know more about his suicide. It is a shame, I believe there is nothing that terrible in life you should take your own life. Each and every person is a blessing!

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  9. The basic information for Robin Williams was good. You were both very vocal and clear and you gave information from the beginning of his career to his success and did not emphasize on his suicide but rather built his character which is good to build on the positives that he did through out his career.

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