Monday, April 4, 2016

Comments for Jennifer Lawrence: Kendell and Alyssa

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12 comments:

  1. The thing I liked the most about your presentation is that you gave us insight to Jennifer Lawrence's character. You described her personality along with where she stands on certain things. Not to mention you presented us with the types of the she does outside of her work life.
    The one thing I think could have been better was going a bit more depth on her roles in movies, etc.

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  2. I like that you talked about who she is as a person. You gave great examples of how she shows who she is and what she is willing to risk to keep her strong belief of who she is. I think you could have added more info about her playing the role Katniss and how did Katniss influence the young culture. Overall good job!

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  3. One thing i must definitely say is how well Kendell and Alyssa talked about who Jennifer is outside of her films. I like how they explained that she inst afraid to be who she wants to be. I was also surprised how much charity work she really does.

    One thing i think would have helped the presentation would have been explaining some of the films she has been in and how they affect her audience. While they briefly touched on her role in the hunger games films, they could have added a bit more to it.

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  4. You really showed her character and how much she shows who she is. As in she does not let anyone change her and she is a very real person. When you brought up The Tonight Show with Jay Leno it really showed ans supported your reasoning for her influence. If you were to go in to greater detail with who she was playing in the movies she played it could of strengthened or backed up more of what you were trying to convey with her influence. The character really shows who she wants to be portrayed as to those who are going to be influenced by her such as the impressionable youth.

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  5. communication was very clear and you were able to understand i learned that i dont have to change who i am too impress someone i like the way you add that helps in children camp with her mom i think one thing that could have been different talk more about the children camp that she helps with what does she do what is the age group whaere is it local overall good job kendell and alyssa

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  6. I thought you did a great job with complimenting one another on your presentations. It was refreshing to hear that there are stars that take interest in the lives of others, more importantly the less fortunate. Points were made clear.

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  7. Jenifer is from Louisville Kentucky? Thats only two hours away from cincinnati lol. I love this presentation. Theres so much that we know about celebrities these days. I love that she tells her contractors that she refuses to loose weight and things like that. I think they only thing that she will do is dye her hair thats it. Loved it you guys rock!!!!!!!

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  8. You guys did a great job of explaining the type of person she is by informing us of the charity/volunteer work, and the way she really stays true to herself. It was a great presentation, but possibly telling some about the roles she plays would have made the presentation even better.

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  9. I really like how you explained her as a person, and not her based on roles that she's had in movies! I wish you would've had more information on her transition to being famous!

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  10. I really like how you explained her as a person, and not her based on roles that she's had in movies! I wish you would've had more information on her transition to being famous!

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  11. I also believe that the way that you guys stayed with her personality was a good thing because it was more about how she helps our youth and not how her characters do.

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  12. Definitely agree with a lot of the comments. You did a great job emphasizing her character and how much of a positive influence she is for both youth and women. You did a good job going into details about her charities and also showed examples of how she does not worry about what people think of her. Like when you showed her telling the story of the stripper which is something that was funny and real and brings her back into humanity rather than viewing her as this A-list celebrity.

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